Thursday, January 11, 2007

Comperison and contrast--fina

Which one do you think is convenience, convenience store, or vending machine?

Nowadays, people pursued convenience due to the busy life. We can find more and more convenience stores in the streets, such us 7-11 and FamilyMart, along with vending machines in the alley. They have become our good friends in our life. We could get more things from them. I am going to talk about convenience stores and vending machines in three points: the appearance, the service, and the goods variety.

First, convenience stores are quite different from vending machines in appearance. Convenience stores have storefront and clerks, while vending machines only tonelessly stand there. For example, 7-11 and FamilyMart are famous convenience stores in Taiwan. They change their appearance when big festival days come. At Christmas and New Year times, you could see clerks wearing Christmas hats and costumes. There are different decorations over there, such as Christmas tree and Spring Festival Couplets. On the other hand, vending machines are just sale machines. They don’t have a lot of changes on their appearance and any decorations.

Second, convenience stores have better service than vending machines, if you get lemon goods from vending machine, you can’t ask a refund, but you can do it at convenience store. Supposing you buy food that is overdue in convenience stores, you can ask clerks to change another one. In addition, convenience stores provide a lot of service, such as microwaving food, copying, sending parcels, faxing, and purchasing food in advance. The clerks always politely ask,” May I help you?” Unlike convenience stores, which offered genial service, vending machines are very impersonal. They always do standoff by his customers. Vending machines sometimes defraud of money.

Finally, the vending machines only have one kind of goods, while there are many different sorts of goods in convenient stores. Maybe you need newspaper, tissues, water, food and anything else in the morning, you can get them in convenient stores. You find that there are no beverages at party, you can buy them there immediately. Convenient stores display thousands of products which you can choose as you need. However, there are not much goods in a vending machine, if you need much more, you have to pass through the street and the alley to find more vending machines.

The convenience became an important element in our life, so the number of convenience stores is still increasing. We can see a convenience store only ten footsteps away. They are much more than vending machines. Now, both vending machine and convenience stores are common and offer easy service to consumers. I like convenience stores more than vending machines because convenience stores are more beautiful appearance, better service, and parti-colored goods.

Comperison and contrast--fina

Which one do you think is convenience, convenience store, or vending machine?

Nowadays, people pursued convenience due to the busy life. We can find more and more convenience stores in the streets, such us 7-11 and FamilyMart, along with vending machines in the alley. They have become our good friends in our life. We could get more things from them. I am going to talk about convenience stores and vending machines in three points: the appearance, the service, and the goods variety.

First, convenience stores are quite different from vending machines in appearance. Convenience stores have storefront and clerks, while vending machines only tonelessly stand there. For example, 7-11 and FamilyMart are famous convenience stores in Taiwan. They change their appearance when big festival days come. At Christmas and New Year times, you could see clerks wearing Christmas hats and costumes. There are different decorations over there, such as Christmas tree and Spring Festival Couplets. On the other hand, vending machines are just sale machines. They don’t have a lot of changes on their appearance and any decorations.

Second, convenience stores have better service than vending machines, if you get lemon goods from vending machine, you can’t ask a refund, but you can do it at convenience store. Supposing you buy food that is overdue in convenience stores, you can ask clerks to change another one. In addition, convenience stores provide a lot of service, such as microwaving food, copying, sending parcels, faxing, and purchasing food in advance. The clerks always politely ask,” May I help you?” Unlike convenience stores, which offered genial service, vending machines are very impersonal. They always do standoff by his customers. Vending machines sometimes defraud of money.

Finally, the vending machines only have one kind of goods, while there are many different sorts of goods in convenient stores. Maybe you need newspaper, tissues, water, food and anything else in the morning, you can get them in convenient stores. You find that there are no beverages at party, you can buy them there immediately. Convenient stores display thousands of products which you can choose as you need. However, there are not much goods in a vending machine, if you need much more, you have to pass through the street and the alley to find more vending machines.

The convenience became an important element in our life, so the number of convenience stores is still increasing. We can see a convenience store only ten footsteps away. They are much more than vending machines. Now, both vending machine and convenience stores are common and offer easy service to consumers. I like convenience stores more than vending machines because convenience stores are more beautiful appearance, better service, and parti-colored goods.

Tuesday, January 02, 2007

comparison and contrast-draft1

Which one do you think is more convenience?

Nowadays, people pursued convenience due to the busy life. We can find more and more convenience stores in the streets, such us 7-11 and FamilyMart, along with vending machines in the alley. They have become our good friends in our life. We could get more things from them. I am going to talk about convenience store and vending machine in three points: the appearance, the service, and the goods variety.

First, convenience store has storefront and clerks whom you can ask something, while vending machine without, they only toneless stand there. 7-11 and FamilyMart are famous convenience sores in Taiwan. In addition to provide convenient service, they also change their appearance when big festival days come. For example, at Christmas and New year, you could see clerks wear wearing Christmas hat and different decoration over there, such as Christmas tree, Spring Festival Couplets, or any ornament. On the other hand, vending machine is just a sale machine, it doesn’t have too many changes on its type and it even doesn’t have any decorations.

Second, if you take lemon goods that you can’t ask to refund, convenience store can. Supposing you buy food that is overdue, you can ask clerk to change another. In addition, it has provided a lot of service, such as microwave food, copy, send parcel, fax, and purchase in advance. The clerks always courteously ask: May I help you? Unlike convenience store, which offered genial service. Vending machine is very impersonal. It always does standoff by his customers. And I am very angry that vending machine defraud of my money.

Finally, the vending machine only has one kind of goods, but there are many different sorts of goods in convenient store. Maybe you need a newspaper, tissue, water, food and anything else in the morning, you can get them in convenient store. Even you discover that there is no soy sauce to cook, you can buy it there, too. Convenient store displayed thousands of produces which you can choose any one you need. However, there is only one kind of goods in a vending machine, if you need many commodity, you have to pass through the street and the alley to find different sort vending machine.

The handiness is become an important element in our life, so convenience store’s scalar is still accelerating. We can see a convenient store only ten footsteps distance. On the other hand, convenience store is universality than vending machine. Now, both vending machine and convenience store are common and offering easy service to consumer, but I like convenience store more than vending machine. It is more sweet and divertive.

Monday, December 25, 2006

Comparison and contrast –outline

Which one do you think is more convenience?

Main idea
Compare and contrast vending machine and convenience store in two points: similar and different.

Body
a. Similar
1. they all offer convenient service for consumer.
2. they offer a lot of goods.

b. Different
1. vending machine without storefront and sales, but convenience store have.
2. you can’t take a refund when you get a lemon good, but convenience store can.
3. vending machine only is a pallid machine without emotion, while convenience store have clerks you can talk with them.

Conclusion
No matter both vending machine and convenience store are very common now,I like convenience store than vending machine, because it is more sweet.

Thursday, December 07, 2006

classification-final

Three groups of friends

Good friends play an important role in our life. They can help us solve the difficulties. There are three different groups of friends. The first category of friends are from work, second group is from junior college, third category of friends are from university.

The first category of friends are my colleagues at work who taught me how to work well in a bookstore. They are beautiful and kindhearted girls, and we often had small talk about life. For example, Stacy and Lisa gave me an optimistic attitude to my life. They encouraged me when I took tests, and gave me comforts if I did a bad job.

My good friends in college school, Andvs and Brave, had a positive attitude to me. They had good dreams and tried to make them come true. For example, they made efforts to prepare for this university exam, and got a good accomplishment. Therefore they would like to give me some suggestions when I had trouble in studies.

The third category of friends are friends in STUT now. They are very lively and crazy, so I feel high-spirited every day. Eunice, Ines, Karen, Kate, and Ryan always encouraged me and taught me my schoolwork when I felt down. For instance, Karen taught me how to study linguistics well. They are very nice, which wakes me powerful.

Without friends in life, my world will be colorless. Friend can help us to overcome the difficulties and give us comforts when we are confronted with trouble. Above all, we can learn a lot from one another. I hope that our friendship will be as close as ever.

Monday, December 04, 2006

classification-draft2

Three groups of play friends

Good friends are an important role in our life. They can help us solve the difficulties. There are three different groups of friends. The first category of friends are from work, second group is from junior college, third category of friends are from university.

The first category of friends are my colleagues at work who taught me how to work well in a bookstore. They are beautiful and kindhearted girls, and we often had small talk about life. For example, Stacy and Lisa, gave me an optimistic attitude to my life. They encouraged me when I went to take tests, and gave me comforts if I did a bad job.

My good friends in college school, Andvs and Brave, had a positive attitude to me. They had good dreams which were hard to reach. For example, they made efforts to prepare for this university exam, and got a good accomplishment. Therefore they would like to give me some suggestions when I had trouble in studies.

The third category of friends are friends in STUT now. They are very lively and crazy, so I feel high-spirited every day. Eunice, Ines, Karen, Kate, and Ryan always encouraged and taught me my schoolwork when I felt down. For instance, Karen taught me how to study linguistics well. They are very nice, which wakes me powerful.

Without friends in life, my world will be colorless. Friend can help us to overcome the difficulties, since us comforts when we are confronted with trouble. Above all, we can learn a lot from one another. I hope that our friend ship will be as close as ever.

Friday, December 01, 2006

Classification-draft 1

My three groups of friends

Friends are played an important role in our life. They can help us pass the difficulty, but maybe make us to sink out, too. There are three different groups of friends. The first category of friends is from work, second group of is from college, third category of friends is from university.

The first category of friends is my colleagues who taught me how to work in a bookstore. They are beautiful and kindhearted girls, and we often have small talks about life. My colleagues, Stacy and Lisa, give me an optimistic attitude for my life. They gave me encouragement when I went to take test, and gave me comfort if I made bad accomplishment.

My good friends in college school, Andvs and Brave, have a positive attitude for me. They have good dreams but hard to reach. For example, they made efforts to prepare for this university exam, and got a good accomplishment. And they will give me some suggestions when I met up trouble.

The third category of friends is my good friends in STUT now. They are very lively and crazy, so I feel interested every day. Eunice, Ines, Karen, Kate, and Ryan always encouraged and taught me for my schoolwork when I feel down, such as Karen taught me how to analyze sentences language class. They are very nice and I have power everyday because of them.

If without friends in our life that is not have color. They can help us to pass the difficulties, but maybe could let us to down. We can learn something from different friends. We should study good attitudes but avoid having bad attitudes.

Tuesday, November 21, 2006

classification-outline

Introduction
Friend: friends from work, friends from collage, friends from university

Body
1.MY colleagues give me an optimistic attitude for my life.
They taught me how to work in bookstore.
We often talk small talk that about life things.
They are beautiful and kindhearted girls.

2.My good friends in college school that have an positive attitude for me.
They have a good dream and hard to reach.
They will give me some suggestion when I have confusion as to what to do next.

3.They are my good friends now.
They are very lively and crazy so I feel interesting every day.
I have power every day because of them.
They have always encouraged me for my schoolwork.

Conclusion
We can learn something from different friends. Good attitudes we want to study but bad attitudes we want to alert for myself.

write a sentence to explain the meaning of each quote

1.A student is not a vessel to be filled but a lamp to be lighted.

Students have limitless possibilities to study.

2.Nine-tenths of education is encouragement.

For education the encouragement is best way more than penalty.

3.To educate a man in mind and not in morals is to educate a menace to society.

Education should include the knowledge and morals.

4.I pay the schoolmaster, but it is the other boys who educate my son.

We can not only learn from teacher but also from classmates and friends.